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When we submitted our final films, they were all quite similar in terms of content, but with quite different choices in terms of editing and sound track. The marks we got back described our shots as 'visually articulate' but questioned our use of both music and a voice as this creates the impression of being both inside and outside the characters mind at the same time. I think my final submission had some techniques that worked quite well, such as subtly reversing the music when the movie took a turn for the surreal. On the other hand some of the shots could have been better, and the sound could have been more subtle in the hands of someone with the head for it.